Poetry / Roses
Roses are red
violets are blue
my heart is black
and untrue.
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A nice switch on the usual. Although if you add the word “so” before “untrue,” it would not only accentuate what a devil you are, and implies that you mean to be, like it, and will do again, while simultaneously correcting the missing beat of the last line. :>)
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Definitly two seconds of effort.. Sigh it’s so cliche and so elementary..
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Ahahaha, short and to the point. It’s fucking hilarious.
Funny.
G.T. Roe
i like it. only heartys shouldnt be black they’re the most important body part the one that can save a life b/c they contain love.
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