Poetry / Grandad....my heart is breaking
I dont know how to say this,
i dont know how to start
the only thing im feeling
is this pain deep in my heart
I never thought this day would come
not in my wildest dreams
now my life is in despair
its tearing at the seems
I always hoped youd be around
to see my wedding day,
watch my kids grow up
i just wish that you could stay
I wish i could be with you
every minute of every day
but when i sit an look at you
i just dont know what to say
I remember when we were younger
i used to sit upon your knee
an i remember i always asked you
for your “special cup of tea”
You mean the world to me
an i would do anything for you
i pray for you in silence
i just hope my wish comes true
So if i dont come round much
it doesnt mean that i dont care
theres nothing that i can do for you
an that i just cant bare
cos if i had it my way
id take away your pain
id give up everything i have
to see you well again
so no matter what the outcome
i just want you to know
i will always love you
and my love will always grow
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I loved it you can feel how much he means to you check out your punctuation. Very lovely poem
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This is awesome and i can beleive people write such good poems and etc. and anyways! keep writing really good! and you should publish a book with all your Poems if this is a Poem write More Poems and then Put them into a Book!
-Me
beautiful elegy/ode. very personal and sweet.
Good job of putting your pain down.. I recently lost a loved one to cancer and to write out your pain is very cathartic.
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