Poetry / STRENGTH

So I
Turned around and
Realized what was
Expected of me,
Never forgetting that
God does
Things for a reason.
He is with me.

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September 25, 2006

Acapulco_Blue

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Acapulco_Blue reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Short and to the point no doubt, but this leaves a lot of questions in the mind of the reader, what happened? why did he turn around, what changed, what made him change? While suspense if good in small doeses, this leaves too many for my taste. But it has such a simple and profound message, and in all honesty I really like it.

Good Job.

Kyle

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November 17, 2005

gondorianmedievalist

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gondorianmedievalist reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I really like this acrostic. It turned out poetic, the lines flow together really wonderfully. Something in the first “So I turned” really makes this whole acrostic work. It’s deeply insightful, and just poetic enough, and not at all tacky. Nice job.