Poetry / Behind Closed Doors

ya, if i was getting paid for this, i would care about spelling. as for grammar, i write how i talk, which seems more real to me, but not everybody likes that (style). but thanks none the less. after my last review, it makes me happy to have the next be the kind of person i mentioned existed, who would take this work for what it is. thank you.

this is quite an old poem, so i have not killed myself. and it is supposed to be disturbing, the truth usually is, and as usual, most people cannot handle it. truth is scary! this is a poem that i will probably not ry to make friendlier because in order to be able to relate to it, you have to have been in a pretty unfriendly place at least once in your life. the seriousness is that life takes us down some dark roads, but how we come out of that can often depend on how much thought we put into our situation. i was quite serious when i wrote this, so i did need help, even tried to do some of the things in this poem, and was lucky enough to live to tell about it and let others know that we all have our moments.