Poetry / If I were God... I would Create...
A painting
An imperfect picture
Paint words together then label them scripture
Poetry like a sculpture
Can pave our very culture
Art captures the essence of our human nature
Like the need to feed
Our minds must create
Consuming the eluding inspirations of the fates
Have determined
Our time has come
The human race’s run is almost done
While here in the U.S. of A were having fun
While our leaders are leading us to KINGDOM COME!
Its a cruel fact its wack
To ever “pre-emptively” attack
Another brother of another color in the back
Stabbed is our constitution
Our solution
Social revolution from this Military Corporate Institution
Is there any restitution?
For the War enslavement and War depravement of Iraqi children
There gettin away with it
Proclaimin it
Liberation of their terrorism
Terrorism
Tear ROARism
Tear THEMism
Tear Roar RAZE them if their MUSLIMism
I say terror the tyrants tearing the torn
Bombs are exploding nurseries
While babies are born
Mothers mourn!
Bleeding tears of skorned blood
Splatters the ripped shreaded shattered heads
While her broken eyes are drip drip dripping on the dead
While Bush and the devil are skip skip skipping ahead
Suck suck sucking this nation is goin
Down Down Drown Drowning
Poor Babies are Dying!
While Bush is still lying
As an artist im still trying
To paint
An imperfect picture
Paint words together then label them scripture
Poetry like a sculpture can pave our very culture
Art captures
The true essence of our human nature
I need you to feed
Your minds must create
Consume these eluding inspirations of the fates…
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i love what youve started with
“A painting
An imperfect picture”
kind of ironic in a way really, because when you paint you can manipulate the images and paint what you want to see rather what is there.. or sometimes the complete opposite. and yet it is still not “perfect” in the same way as a photograph..
also. this may see a bit random.. but do you not think its a bit strange how we as humans have created these cities .. which are beautiful in their own ways.. and dull at the same time. houses by the river are often more expensive than houses that are not. cause we are drawn to nature.
if that makes sense??
hmm maybe im reading into this too much.
hope all is well
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Very good. You have managed to put the abomination of our government into words that are easy to read yet full of sadness, desperation and truth. The lines about blood dripping on the heads while Bush is skipping up ahead is right on.
Brilliant!! The imagery with your “Painted imperfect picture” and being an artist who “paints words together then labels them scripture” i also loved how you played with the word terrorism. The only mistake i saw was in the line “Here in the..were having fun” It should be we’re not were. Otherwise, this needs to get published!! great work!
ok love the way you started this with “A painting
An imperfect picture
Paint words together then label them scripture” excellent words….this whole piece i enjoyed, the imagery was incredible,I even see the occasional rhyming , I think Ive always had a passion for conscientious works…well done keep writing
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