Poetry / The infinite emotion of forever

What is, as so many have said, love?
        Is it a longing stare? Or is it a flirting glance?
        Is it a small touch? Or is it a long embrace?
        Is it a loquacious poem? Or is it a laconic haiku?
I believe it is none of these.  It is in the in between.  It is the electricity that binds two beings in blanket of forever.  It is the air between two lovers as they say goodnight.  It is the breath before the “I love you.”
Love is nothing but a word for everything you can’t describe.
Love—is an infinite emotion.

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AdRiElLe753 avatar General Friend

December 18, 2006

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that was excellent oh my gosh

love is undescribable, its everything you want to say it is but you cant becasue you dont know how to and so you call it love, its like, the persone you love, could be your solmate, or not, but its just who it is that makes it so undescribable
di dyou write that yourself??

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