Children's / Tommy's Problem
Tommy had a problem
he couldn’t tie his shoe
mom and dad were not around
he didn’t know what to do
Tommy had a problem
he had to figure it out
he couldn’t walk around
with his laces all about
Tommy had a problem
so he began to try
one lace over the other
in the hole and tie
Tommy had a problem
he was almost there
a loop with one lace
the other stays bare
Tommy had a problem
one more step to go
around the corner under the bridge
and then pull like so.
Tommy fixed his problem
he was so proud
he did it all by himself
with no one around
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