Poetry / SINGING IS TO BREATHING

Singing is to breathing,
breath taking it would be,
I live for it,
It makes me whole,
It completes me,
It is my passion,
My one my true love

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barb avatar General Stranger

November 29, 2006

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How about “Singing is to breathing”??  i think this could be expanded and maybe add some imagery to make a real nice poem?  instead of just a quote.

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