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I have all these hidden talents
I don’t know what to do with them
What to do, What to say
I am so shy time is slipping away

Words comes crushing, crashing
Creativity, emotions are flowing
excitement craving to come out
bursting, dying, crying,
All that I hidden within.

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barb avatar General Stranger

November 29, 2006

barb

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barb reviewed Version 2 - Read 100%% of the Item

i know what it’s like to be “so shy”  That is why i like to write.  You must like it also.  So write about it!

teddybear818 avatar General Friend

November 23, 2006

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teddybear818 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I saw the- help…
now you can express yourself more than that…
What are your hidden talents, name them and claim them. Make the reader feel that they do not posess what you know or the things you can do…

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sweetnessoneslo

Age: 43
Loc: Buffalo, NY
Gen: F
Last Login: June 28
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