An abyss in the chaos of it all,
As in one more step, the greatest fall,
Pride is not the only thing which can bring you down,
For if you close your ears the whole world is silence, no sound,
When you are hurt don’t be alone,
All the seeds you have already sewn,
For there is always another who will guide you through,
Someone else who knows what it is you want to do,
Tasks make us busy, when there’s nothing to tell,
When your busy, you can’t see, you reside in hell,
As fire is the creation of man, its greatest will against it all,
As you wander in the archives of history, down the hall,
When you consider, you take account of everything,
As to drown yourself in sorrow, you are better off to swim,
For somewhere, someone has something for us to hear,
For in the warm embrace of a lover’s arms, you know the truest care,
To ignore all others to smile when the rain pours,
Without all the where fore afters, just simple where for alls,
Juggle with me, emotions in the air,
Stand for forgiveness, emotions sincere,
When you are in the place you should never have seen,
When you have nothing to worry about, the never have been,
If you want I will be somewhere else in your ever more,
As I cling on to the ever spinning falling floor…
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I really like your style of writing, there’s something quite classic about it.it’s fairly dreamlike and a little cynical but through it all there’s still optimism bursting through.
deep…..i had 2 really slow down and think about where this work took me. i felt as if the rhythm flowed inspirational at first,then,romatical….with a lost feeling of which was it’s purpose?
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