Poetry / now that your gone

The words are said
the thoughts won’t stop
the feelings dead
my world is lost
as I lye here in my bed
not wanting to get up
knowing my world will go on
knowing theres something I must do
even though your gone
even though I can’t have you
you’ve put me in the ground
you’ve left me in this place
with no one around
and only the salt from your skin to taste
I relive the memories
that make me happy
you said you had to go
and I will give up on you coming back
cause now your just a part of my past

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April 07, 2007

damian71

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damian71 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

nice peace of work, tragic wrapped up in irony. Really feel the pain of loss and a horrible sense of forever ness. Particularly like the last stanzas”I relive the memories
that make me happy
you said you had to go
and I will give up on you coming back
cause now your just a part of my past
very nice.

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