Poetry / Break My Heart

Just break my heart.
Please.
Break my heart.

You know
You’ve wanted to
Break my heart.

And I mind no longer,
So break my heart.

Take it out of my body,
Hold it over your head,
And smash it on the floor.
Break my heart.

Watch it shatter into pieces.
Watch them go flying
About the house.

And run away.
You wouldn’t want to get caught
After you
Break my heart.

Would you?

The house wouldn’t sell,
Once people find out that you
Broke my heart.

So it will stand alone.
Until it falls.
Because it will fall down.
And it will shatter apart,
As most things do.

But the pieces will remain,
They will not fall apart
As most things do.
Because they are pieces
Of a heart.

And they will remain.

Until, of course,
They are submerged
By the soil
On the spot where you
Broke my heart.

And in the ground
They will lie until
They grow,
Into new hearts.

Maybe this time
You won’t
Break my heart.

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