Lyrics / IN OUR PRIME

I remember my sisters leaving us with the kids, I was the babysitter, I suppose you were too, thats what happens you join the cycle dont you!! I like the bit about the handbag, I still do this all the time, not with my handbag of course buy my mobile phone.

You know what, its funny, because I feel like I am in my prime now even though I am knocking on a bit (not too much!!)

Hey this was fun! I really liked it. There was some wording I didn’t get but I tend to be pretty thick headed so i’m sure its not you. Maybe i need to learn some new lingo. Anyhoo, I think my favorite part was

“The butterflies
in our stomaches
kept on growing.
Our fuelled horizons,
no red lights
no slowing….”

I remember this when I was younger. I’ve gotten boring now. The rythm was kind of fun and frenzied just like a young person that doesn’t care feels. Nice reflection.  _L

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December 21, 2006

by EMMANITRATE

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You are one of the only persons that got it right, you are on my track completely. Thanks.

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This is good, but sometimes it rhymed and sometimes it was just everywhere, if you know what I mean.  I like the line “I cry, I’m sitting on it!” because it added some humor to it.  Good job

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December 14, 2006

by EMMANITRATE

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Thanks for the reveiw I enjoyed it.

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Reminds me of a couple weekends i’ve spent just dicking around. I could almost feel the wind blowing through my hair with the window rolled down as we cruised down the road headed for no place in particular. Reminds me of the good times when nothing mattered except having a good time.

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December 10, 2006

by EMMANITRATE

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Thanks for the reveiw,I don’t feel that it is quite finished yet, it’s a work in progress. I need to give it more body. It sounds like, when I re-read it, a skeleton of what I was really feeling at the time.

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