Young Adult / THE CONTENDER
From what he was,
to what he later became.
The leap was a sheer drop.
Involved in life,
to shadow,self abuse vice.
Once a hero,then a dreg,
when did it all fall through.
This walking former,
then depressed craved loner.
A contendr till the last.
I remember the shiner,
star filled future.
Layed out before
his gold filled path.
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These could almost be excellent lyrics, and it’s obvious of the passion in which you used to write this. powerful. good job.
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It seems like you have a great foundation. “Sheeeear” I don’t think the emphasis is necessary. Watch for typos:
contender
I like this. Good Job.
:)
JD
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