as well we should, it’s part of the journey….awareness is an ongoing thing :)
Criticism / phenomenal me
you are phenomenal energy!,, you radiate with compassion and love, because that’s who you are…. as tangled in the web that is woven… you will find your way out…. all the wiser for your struggles
I have faith in you as I know your lineage and know your heart
you understand more, you feel more and you live more than the average soul
therefore, not all will understand your plight…. but your joy is easily spread as it permeates the interior, blessing the outside world with it’s embrace
let yourself bask in your light, feel the wonder of creation that is you the mind/ body / spirit that make you so intricately formed yet so simply love
remember who you are and to share your light with others to illuminate their way
live, love, BE
fuck the rest of the nonsense!!
xxoo
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Dauna reviewed Version 1 -
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Nice piece. Good to see such positive words of light to others with out anything expected in return. You are correct with saying the rest is nonsense.
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gabbynat reviewed Version 1 -
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good thoughts, i think most of us struggle with who we ‘really’ are.
mysticwolfpress reviewed Version 1 -
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Awesome!
I can find several places where I can use this, with your permission. Drop me a line about it.
Besure to send your bio and links. What else have you written?
Robert:)
Mystic Wolf Press, Inc.
www.mysticwolfpress.com
www.mysticvillage.org
666writer reviewed Version 1 -
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If you can put this in poetry form, it will sound more powerful. The power is there in word form, but you need to unleash it.
kritzic reviewed Version 1 -
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I like what it says. I sure wish it was talking to me..lol I used to have a tape that played something like this in my ear everynight. This makes me wish I had it back. hearing this everynight would make anyone feel special.
popsangl reviewed Version 1 -
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love “phenominal energy” seems it was writter about you by someone else. outside looking in kinda thing.
more like an observation i guess. now look at me, what do you see?
easywriter57 reviewed Version 1 -
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You really need to work on your grammar (bet I told you this before). I won’t make you spend hundreds of credits on this. Just PROOFREAD YOUR WORK OR HAVE SOMEONE ELSE DO IT!
Nice to get a compliment from someone like that, though!
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