Journal, Diary, & Blogging / When I die part 5

When I die,

I hope it’s while I’m swimming.  So I can finaly shit in a pool without making a scene.  

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ArielRed avatar General Stranger

January 29, 2007

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HA! I love it. Perfectly irreverant and suprising. I do have to mention though, that I think someone dying in a swimming pool with cause even more of a scene then someone just shitting in it.

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January 28, 2007

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Hahah! This funny! Good work,and Keep it coming! BUt instead of a period, you might wanna make that a comma. I think it would read better that way.

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January 16, 2007

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I loved this one as well. I would love to see a whole collection of these as a book. I don’t know if others would buy it, but I know that my friends and I would.

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January 14, 2007

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That’s funny

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