Poetry / Transition
Love sewn lips
keep the truth from my eyes.
Forced blank stares
pour over my whole body.
Crying, laughing, bursting inside
as instinct emerges from the pain.
Fight or flight fancy
puts an end to my
love sewn lips.
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I think you are saying something very deep, something is hidden, and sewn deep within you. You are not sure whether to emote with that which you are feeling.
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