Poetry / Happy & Loving Thoughts

I travel the world lost and alone
seeming as I’m just a stranger to your heart
another tear bleeds from my eye tonight
always regretting when your hand slipped away;

I got you on my mind
never missing love till it finally ends
don’t waste your time searching for love
it will come to you through a dream come true;

I fell for your love so easily
you broke my heart and left me with pain and misery
like the winds of a dove
our love shall fly high above
like a tear our love will flow
to an endless sea of sadness
love never shine on hearts of loneliness
their ain’t no wind to sail our love to happiness;

You got to keep loving
or your soul will never be truly free
giving of myself but never gaining
listen to these crying tears
we shared forbidden passion so breathlessly
trapped in a place so cold and alone
a place of ice and snow
lost far from being loved
my heart was destroyed without a trace
now I know this time our love is for real
it feels better then ever before;

The way I felt
when I had you; I was king
I played the part of the fool
i prayed to be loved
but those prays were never answered
my heart was blackened
will somebody tell me what true love means
you gave me my dreams
you gave me means
raising my cries for the heavens to hear
for your love I’ll be a slave
i get on my knees everyday
and pray that I’ll find somebody to love me someday;

Finding no one i cry the finial tear
living without love is the ultimate nightmare
an awaiting paradise awaits my blacked soul
afraid to love again
but like everything else love comes to an end
by you my heart was used and abused
we tried to love each other again in vain
love always comes with a price
you never ride for free
love fades away in the sands of time
in the rolling shadows of melting tears
in your eyes I feel the hunger
and the desperate tears that tears the night;

If you find love again
it will never be the same
my innocence lost
I live in darkness
with no light guiding me
you hold the key
that will unlock my heart
and set me free;

I am a man who is alone
searching for my heart too have a permeant home
I search far a wide
everybody seems to have love but me

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December 20, 2006

momsgirl2

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momsgirl2 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I like this and I like your writing..I would go with a totally unrhyming scheme rather than having a line rhyme now and then..Make it free verse and see if you like it better. You speak from the heart or experience and getting it down on paper gets it out of the soul..Just cut the rhymes when they are not needed..Good job.