Quotes / Man

Im not sure i particularly follow this.

Demonic entities with earthly proportions are not a speciality of mine. It does however remind me of a sermon about how heaven and earth can only exist when there is a hell. once hell/devil/demons are defeated, earth will become heaven etc…

If i were to be critical, i would say the quote lacks rhythm, it does not roll easily from the toungue.
Perhaps the close proximity of ‘with’ and ‘without’ needs looking at? It seems to stifle the flow.
Also look at where you use capital letters.

we’re not the only animals capable of evil. eh, not bad. seems like our intelligence and greed acted through technology does seem to make our evil deeds seem to be the greatest. can you clear up the second half though? it’s just a little confusing. perhaps switching “with” with “of” or “entities” with “actions” just a tip.

Interesting quote, very subjective.
You may be right.