Poetry / Blues

blues

the blues swelter,
like beer spilled on
new york city blacktop,
in the teeth of
urban august

the blues fester,
like rotting roadkill,
beaten senseless
by the fierce tires
of the suburban dream

the blues penetrate,
like the sluggish
thrusts of
tired fucking, in a
smoke-filled neon
backroom in
Chinatown

these kids can’t
play no blues,
like a man of years
can’t play no punk;
the middle finger
amputated,
replaced by burnt-orange
mood lights;
candle wax mountains
on Mississippi
windowsills

the blues need time,
like fine wine
in old oak barrels;
bitter, then smooth on
the palate,
living every moment
in daydream tears

the blues, not
in kegs and
reckless boasts,
but in the
feminine contours of
ice cubes- afloat in my
whiskey, as the
old man across
the bar winks,
smiles his toothless
smile,
lights my way
to nowhere

You need to log in to urbis or create an urbis account to review this writing.

Reviews

Sort Reviews by  Newest |  Oldest |  Highest Quality |  Lowest Quality |  Newest Comments | 

 
inxthexpinesx avatar General Stranger

March 03, 2008

inxthexpinesx

personal info reviewer stats
inxthexpinesx reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item
This 13 word review has not been unlocked.
DragonBlue avatar General Stranger

November 25, 2007

DragonBlue

personal info reviewer stats
DragonBlue reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item
This 37 word review has not been unlocked.
reerds avatar General Stranger

August 13, 2007

reerds

personal info reviewer stats
reerds reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item
This 37 word review has not been unlocked.

Showing 1 - 3 of 3

Creator
Charles avatar

Charles

Age: 35
Loc: Astoria, NY
Gen: M
Last Login: August 13
Relevant Links
Item Stats

GENERAL

3 Reviews 0 Comments
Version 1
Latest Activity: 9 months ago

REVIEW QUEUE

Appeared in Queue: 24 Times
Skipped: 1 Time
Large_criteria Ratings & Rankings
Tags

There are no tags for this item.