Poetry / The House feels empty.
The House feels empty.
an air of cold-wet silence
a feeling of conclusions forgone.
The splintering wood underfoot dictates that shoes must always be worn.
Cracked windows view a broken home.
Red paint hides the truth.
Vague metaphors lie on the floor.
A carpet
—moth-eaten, frayed around the edges, with abstract designs—
sleeps beneath a three-legged broken table.
An old orange door grins at the outside world,
like a finger motioning in,
but no-one answers it’s call.
This orphan home was once filled with
laughter, giggles, smiles,
cries, tears,
screams.
Then.
Nothing.
Now, it just sits, abandoned;
it’s windows watching time tick,
it’s wood, becoming cockroach ridden,
it’s paint peeling—falling like tears—
it’s door, broken now, lets all in.
But none come.
Sleeping silently, The House weeps.
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This writing paints a really beautiful picture in my mind. I found it very soothing and haunting in a way. Good stuff.
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