L8NiteBluz reviewed Version 2 -
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Here!! Here!! Well done!! I could not agree more. I tend to be a stickler for grammar, punctuation, etc., not only when it comes to my writing, but other peoples as well. Unfortunately in today’s ultra casual society, things like appearance, grammar, spelling, etc., seem to be cast aside for a less demanding population. Your piece is a great metaphor for life in general in the new millenium. One fact that you point out, which many should take to heart, is the difference between rules being broken by one who understands them, and by one who does not, this speaks volumes. As for whether or not this is the right category for this piece, I would say that it could work equally as well here, or in “Journal, Diary, and Blogging”. Nicely done.