Lyrics / I Won't Ever Stop Loving You

hi there,

well it’s a nice love song by someone who i can guess, is in love..:)you repeat the title which is good, but you wait to long to bring it to our attention,it should be worked in after the first verse,2nd verse the most,it should be a repeating chorus,with that title throughout, like alot of popular songs..i yapped enough,,,:)..later, jim

hithre,

i like your lyric, a very good emotional song of a love that slip through your fingers..and regret it..it’s something WE can also all relate to which is good..it may be a bit to long to be radio friendly but a fine job in general..

Very nice. You showed me an older version of this, and it has only improved. You convey feelings extremely well in this piece of yours. I really get a look inside your head, man. I see some issues involving flow when read, and I imagine that would translate over to singing unless handled carefully. It’s kind of lengthy, but then, some of the best or most entertaining songs have had lengthy lyrics. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more of your stuff in the future.

This is really touching. I could relate to this so much… Unfortunalty, the person I love I’ll never see again. At least not in this life time. Never Stop Writing

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Hey, this looks pretty good! Of course, as a songwriter myseld i know that it is hard to tell exactly without actually hearing the song… It looks like it may be choppy in certain places, but if the music is right, and it is a talented enough singer to pull it off, this would be a loved song!

It is especially good because it is one that people can relate to. People tend to like the songs like that… those are the ones that become “my song”, if you know what i’m saying…

Keep it up, and i’m sure you will do well! From one sngwriter to another, this is quite impressive! But one thing i would do personally is take out some of the rhymes… but that is just me… there too obvious, if you know what i am saying

Dude; I love this piece. I know exactly how the person singing this song feels. I have been there to many times. It makes me feel better knowing that someone else knows how I feel. This is more than beautifull; it is extroidinary. Keep those creative juices flowing
Sincerly Yours, Geno *~

Like Borat would say, very nice. I really liked this song. It really spoke to me and  explains a very deep feeling that not many people experience thankfully. The whole idea that loving someone actually can hurt more than if you have never meet them. Its a well known case when you fall in love so deeply, but for whatever reason you just can’t be with that person whether they want to be with you or not. So I really understood this song and liked how it showed some imagery of what its like to feel that way. There were a couple things I didn’t like. I don’t really feel the chorus because I feel its to cliche and something that wouldn’t work with this generation. It might be a true feeling, but I don’t think it would go well in a lyrical song. The part where you say like the waters of a river, my love for you will never cease to flow. Its just something we have all heard and something just to sentimental for todays generation. I feel it will turn off many listeners. Other than that, I completely loved the song. Every verse had a great scene or thought about the person that is truly the root of the emotion felt. Finally, I would recommend that this song was a little more sad. I feel it does convey the hurt, but not enough for someone to know exactly how it would feel in that situation. Also, if this song is to go to music, then I would recommend a minor key with a slow tempo. And keep the song simple not to drowned out the lyrics and emotion. Thanks for writing this and keep those emotions coming.

Just an FYI, Van Halen has a song titled I can’t stop loving you, and that is the chorus.

Also “Deep in my room sleeping
Hoping my deepest dreams are more than fleeting”

You might want to change the first DEEP to another word, the 2 deeps in the stanza seem redundant so close together.

Nice work overall!

This is a great set of lyrics. The only problem I saw with this is a little bit of a flow problem. I have been taught by several well known artists that lyrics should flow easily as if you were speaking them without any breaks. Other than that, these are a great set of lyrics. Good luck and I hope to hear it as a song some day.