Poetry / Lullaby

Sing me to sleep
with your sweet words
and melodies.
Lull me to dreams
with your songs.
Curl up against me,
your arms tight around me,
your voice in my hair,
and hold me ‘til
night takes us in.

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January 31, 2007

mdpapa

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mdpapa reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

great imagery, “Curl up against me,
your arms tight around me,
your voice in my hair,
and hold me ‘til
night takes us in.”
love it!
it makes me want a girlfriend right now!
But yes very simple yet caring.
Very settle yet speaks great measure and volume to those who do not know what it is like to have this feeling of being cared for.