Lyrics / A work in progress

I thoughtfully enjoyed this poem/lyric. I seems you have a hook so I would guess they are lyrics. First off, I would say re check your spelling such as some times and my self. Also, it would be nice to see these lyrics in a format such as Verse 1 Chorus etc… Secondly, I loved the word progression you put in this song. Some words were put together beautifully such as “where are my seeds miss destiny?” and “scars that branded me” This piece would sound really good with a nice beat either electronically or with the drums. Thats my opinion though, its up to you what you think the music should be. I am also very happy that you added a hook. Nicely done with that one. You resolved the song with a twist allowing a finalization of the song and your life. You are showing people that the song has a purpose and meaning. You give the people thoughts that take this song further than just the words. An imagination that can conform to any mind and in any way the person wants it to end. Very well done, especially with the heart felt words that are so deep.