Lyrics / Tra-loo, Tra-lye
Tra-loo, tra-lye, la-lullabye
Tra-la, tra-lye, tra-loo,
Tra-loo tra-lye, my Sleepy Eyes,
I sing this song for you.
Tra-loo, Tra-lye, my Dearest Prize,
We named the moon La Lune,
Tonight we’ll wish the stars to life,
And fly there dreaming soon.
Hear tra-lye, the lazy sigh
As the river slowly flows;
If the creatures of the woods were here,
They’d curl up warm and close.
It’s time to lay the day behind
Your pillow soft and smooth;
Tonight, Dear play in glittering skies,
Tra-la, Tra-lye, Tra-loo.
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This is really sweet! It has a nice rhythm to it, gentle and melodic.
I think you could do without stanza 3 only because the rhythm seems off, but the rest of the text is great.
Great work.
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Ahh! u posted this…made me smile a wee bit…i loved this on ur other site..i like the why it sounds something that reminds me of the poetry bits by Tolkien in Lord of the Rings…
‘If the creatures of the woods were here,
They’d curl up warm and close’
i like this and i can imagine this being something in a child’s imagination too, at least my daughter cause she loves little woodland critters.
‘It’s time to lay the day behind’
i like how u worded this, its original
good job
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