Lyrics / Lying Secrets

this is pretty good. I like the idea behind it. There is so much that goes on during those nights out, that no one knows about, and it’s sad that there is so much abused trust between lovers. Anyways, good job and keep up the good work.

I really liked these lyrics because I see exactly what you are seeing. And it is everyone now it seems, in our bars, in our movies, in our tv shows. Everybody is cheating and we wonder why as a society, the notion of family, loyalty, and love are going down the drain! Great topic and I think it’s so difficult to get lyrics to flow but you definitely succeeded, awesome job.

It’s hard to face reality when you regret the past.  I liked this, and I hope I have a chance to hear it with your music at some point…

I really like this.  I mentioned in an earlier review to someone else I wished there were more in depth lyrics in mainstream music, and this is an example of what I like to hear.

It’s difficult to review lyrics, without music to get the entire effect, but was this just a poem, it would be one I would share with people.  I really wish this was one I could hear.

I really like some of the imagery you use in this song.
I like how most of the song flows really smooth.
I totally am digging some of the wordage that you use.
My favorite part is:
‘The secret to any regret
Is not to let it affect you now
Don’t ever forget (yeah)
No need for you to pretend
That it, just never happened
It’s time, it’s time to, confess(yeah)’

Unfortunately some parts of the song seem disjointed.  
Some parts of the song make no sense.  For example:
‘If it’s more than you can take
Why say it’s true?
Lie to me take this away, and lie to me’
I think there is a better way for you to make those lines work so that they make more sense.
I think you should work on tweaking the parts of the song that don’t gel with the cadence of the rest of the song.
The song is definitely worth working on so you can get it on the air.
I hope this review is helpful to you.
Blessed be

I like the lyrics, and I like the way you have arranged the structure here. I can’t see myself providing any major critiques, because honestly you have done a good job.  
I agree that the cheating going on is a chronic problem.

If there were one thing that I would point out, it’s that the line which says,

“It’s time to, its time, confess (yeah)”

would perhaps be better stated to say,

“It’s time, it’s time to confess (yeah)”

Nevertheless, I am fond of these lyrics and I think you did a great job. Cheers.

lyrics arent somthing people can judge with a strait face. and if they do then they are full of …. i like this . ive read many differant lyrics and this one seems to be one of the best . it has a universal move to it. imean that is.. you can put many differant styles behind this. from rock to country to pop or even polka… lol good one keep writing