Poetry / Untitled

Cast before the conductor
They wait.

Hand in hand
We the cello section
Slip quietly to the bar.

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February 11, 2007

ChrisMadoch

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78	60.0% (15 votes)	11.2%

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ChrisMadoch reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Should you not be part of the ‘cast’ ie the whole orchestra? Your cello section is very pally and somewhat apart- rather selfishly and irresponsibly succombs to a swift exit for a swift pint. I’m interested now in the relationships in the cello section and what happens when they are tanked up? See what you can summon in us from such few words. Well done. CM