Poetry / Of Light

You and I,
Our small thread lives
Throw yarns
The colour of sun and petroleum,
They trace indefinite routes
Within this
Mandalic mutation.

Persisting to realise,
They will pull us from our feet
and hurl us
Straight
Into the eye of the needle.

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February 16, 2007

ThomasGoss

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ThomasGoss reviewed Version 2 - Read 100%% of the Item

Unexpected, interesting, and satisfying. I like the economy of your words. Also, the end is excellent, and on the second reading I had the image of a human form shrinking. Also, I will admit to learning for the first time about the “Mandalic” meditation aid – with its interesting designs. Cheers.