Poetry / where did my friends go?

they left me in a time of need,where are you now i say
you turned your backs to me, you thought you knew me
cast your stones ,breaking bones are you satisfied! did you fufill you need?
like a pack of animals, destroy the crippled!
no time to save them. am i alone?
no there are others with bruses on there faces,and scares on there hearts
so you call yourselves christians
with a gleem in your eyes,will you cast your stones?
where did my friends go?

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March 31, 2007

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Interesting piece of work. Do you have something against Christians? How long did it take you to write this. Love the hate you display interesting point of view and discription.

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