It is in my interests to entertain the reader as well as enlighten him or her. I understand the muddle and appreciate your sincere humanity, you human you. ;’ No seriously, clarity is important, and I do intend to claryfye(sic) as I may well in the future. It’s just fo’ shits’n’giggles’.
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As we emerge into the new year, we realize that in fact big brother is watching us. Not so totally like the Orwellian adaptation, but more subtle. Nova Roma, sounds nice, and it is nice.
Unless you’re a Christian, of course. Puritancal self hatdred is not the answer to the riddle of life’s elixir. The kingdom of heaven is in the eyes of man, and so shall it be…..Why not? I like to observe the lustre and radiance of a sunny day when I can. Do we want another dark age?
Some do. They are currently being systematically and methodically subjugated to appease false ego. The one the robots in people suits call the one true. For two thousand years it’s gone on, and now you see we have the crux point of the big biscuit with a half hearted denial of the relevance of an archaeolocical dig by people looking out for the best interests of what?
Money? Business? How does it affect the big biz then? Mull over that for a spell.
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Well, I believe your content is truly lacking, for I don’t really see your point in this piece. Second to that are your grammatical and spelling errors. “new year” needs to be “New Year.” “Not so totally like the Orwellian adaptation, but more subtle.” Is a fragment. You don’t need the comma before “sounds” and you could drop the comma before “and” as well. “Puritancal” should be “Puritanical.” “hatdred” should be “self-hatred.” “lustre” is “luster.” You have a syntax problem with this sentence: “They are currently being systematically and methodically subjugated to appease false ego.” And “archaeolocical” is “archaeological.” Next time, use a good dictionary/grammar book or at least use a good grammar/spell checker.
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Interesting, but a little confusing. For instance, this sentence:
“and now you see we have the crux point of the big biscuit with a half hearted denial of the relevance of an archaeolocical dig by people looking out for the best interests of what?”
Not sure what’s really being said here.
Your writing is good, but I’d encourage you to clarify for the reader a little more.
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