Not Urbis, not a game, but both and neither… Concept is the key, using your imagination is also the key as well. Do these things and you’ll understand where I come from
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It all takes place over and over again, and the reptilian minded/hearted want to make sure that they win. Of course, they won’t . But they’ll kick and scream about it every waking second until the next bit hit comes. I should’ve said ‘Big hit’ But it’s not like that, jack
It’s a very long series of battles, costing us an only irritable loss in human resource and other.
It will make the planet stupid , ugly, and weak with a false sense of security, a net of absollute delusion. It’s sad, we have to deal with it, but we’ll survive.I’ll see to it personally.
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I couldn’t even tell what you were taliking about. Were you talking about a game or Urbis?
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I would relate this to politics although you probably have another agenda. You need to make yourself clear on what your subject matter is.
Are you talkng about the war? Your subject isn’t obvious.
You shouldn’t start a sentence with the word but. You should just put a comma before your buts. Hit shouldn’t be in quotes with big. It should be It’s sad that we have….
March 13, 2007
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Other than a mis-spelled word, or two… I would ask… what is “it”? Is “it” the planet? The reptillian? The battles? The state of mind? This is unclear to me. It will be more interesting once I know what it is. I love fantasy.
This reads more like a movie trailer than anything else. What was your purpose for writing this? Was there a purpose?
Not sure what this is or what it’s supposed to mean. Also not sure if you’re really wanting feedback on it since “Final Fantasy” is in your instructions. On the good side, I think you could say more that is worth listening to!
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