Short Story / Bluevit cattlewit bershow catlie and von
“Bluevit cattlewit bershow catlie and von”
That is what he said to me and was gone.
I had been following him around these lands for months, trying to make contact, to make my plea, but always one step behind. That is until I ran upon him in a city called Vons, in a pub.
I spent a good hour in a pub, watching from across the room, trying to work up the courage to approach him. Finally I decided to have a drink, thinking it would help me to raise my confidence.
However my plan didn’t work, it seemed that the more I drank the more nervous I got. Finally, after several hours of drinking, and futile waiting, I was stone drunk, and he was leaving; I followed. He made his way into an Inn not far away, seeming to be little more than buzzing, though he must have drank twice what I had.
I quickly got a room as well, and followed him up, out of site, to see in which room he was placed. As he went into his room, I made my way, stumbling, to mine. Figuring that in the condition I was in that I would simply make a fool of myself, and I would never get his help.
The next morning, head screaming in pain, I made my way to his door. I knocked lightly, and a few moments later his head would appear in the doorway.
“Um, hello.” I said
“Bluevit cattlewit bershow catlie and von”
That is what he said to me and was gone.
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loved it. its wonderfully vague and entertaining.
spotted a spelling error, sight not site,
a light edit would really tighten the read, things such as ‘spent a good hour in a pub’ (the pub, you are talking about the previously mentioned pub, it has become the pub)
‘made his way into an Inn ( to an inn, ‘to’ matches the previous phrase better, and no cap on inn)
these are all minor things but could make all the difference, thanks, it was a nice refreshing read
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