Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Delicious Fingertips

The sense of touch is amazing , we can never touch to much, you explained beautifully how touching makes you feel. I use every sense Ive been given plus the sense of touch my imagination creates. I like your writings.

There really is nothing, like making something out of what others might consider nothing. Your words remind me, strangely you might think, that i often find myself entertained and smiling on subway trains, whilst everyone else looks so sober or vacant; That same sense of finding things where others might see so little.
You have a gift and it is your way of seeing. Reading this is very easy; not a chore or a labour and it comes from, i imagine, the way you live and think. I like it!

This is very awesome. It kind of reminded me of how David Sedaris describes his obsessive compulsive behaviors in Naked. Though I don’t make the comparison to say what you wrote is less original, just that maybe you might get a kick out of it.

I really thought this was written real well and I really like the word “touches” and how you used it.

I really liked this piece. I think in the first sentence when you write ”...to much.” it should be ”...too much.” Other than that, I thought you did a wonderful job with this. It is quite different from anything else. You did a great job describing things, as I was able to obtain a clear image in my mind, as if I were someone watching you. I thought the format you used was unique, yet worked perfectly for this piece. I look forward to reading more of you work.

A very good submission….you led me to repeat your actions as I read, except for the whole inside the jeans waistband thing…I didn’t follow you on that foray. Your descriptions are vivid and expressive, as well as your analysis for the purpose.  You may want to flip your last two sentences…or not.

I really enjoyed reading this piece, it seems at first somewhat innocuous but it has some deeper hidden meaning to it. The sensation of touch allowing a person to feel alive and feel life. Or something like it, that’s what I get from it. I like the way you have laid out each point. It has a sing song quality to it. Nice job

This is very good, `tactile’ even. It is a sense that we often take for granted, and as you point out fail to enjoy.

Suggestion: `...a wineglass would.’ – perhaps `in the way of a wineglass.’ – Petty I know just didn’t like ending in `would’. – only opinion.

p.s. also do last point.

You write really well and piece is to the point and concise. Well done.

This is definitely original. It could be a poem and a good one at that. The railing has great imagery and the flick with the finger at the end was like telling the world to bit me. The last sums up your reasons for touching thinks very well.

I almost never write comments that are all compliments and congratulations because there is very little to be learned from reviews like that, however i must break form for a moment….I could really feel all the sensations you describe and if that isn’t a noteworthy success I don’t know what is. Kudos!!  

I enjoyed reading this piece because i could feel my own fingertips doing the same thing. This is a very tactile piece and brings the reader to the place of sensation. Those are the pieces i tink are the best. i gave it a ten based on this.