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My Woman

I see my woman comin’
She’s walkin through the door
I’ll bet in just a minute, I’ll be laying on the floor
Cause I’m stuck here on this bar stool, without a place to hide
And my woman keeps a-comin’ Goodbye cruel
wor-rld go-ood bye.

When we were newly married, my darlin’ told me “hon,
Always be a good boy, don’t ever try to run’”.
Then she shot a girl in Reno, just cause I said “Hi”
Now my woman’s getting closer,
I think I’m go-ona-a’ die.

I bet you think I’m crazy and should run away and hide
But I can’t live without her, she’s the apple of my eye
And I know I got it coming, I know she’s on to me.
And my woman keeps a movin’
She’s gonna slaughter-er me.

Well if you freed me from this woman
And I moved on down on the line
I don’t think I could make it, Cause my woman’s mighty fine
And I know she really loves me, that’s why I have to stay
Well my woman keeps a-comin’, she’s gonna blow-oh me  a-way…...

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unknownvampiress_e24 avatar General Stranger

November 19, 2005

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unknownvampiress_e24 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I don’t think you breach the copyright law with rewriting lyrics. BUt I am not too sure.

As for the writing itself, it was really good. I could get a feel for where yuo were comming from and with the Johnny Cash tune it’s brilliant.

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November 10, 2005

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The first line and I had “Folsom Prison Blues” tune in my head!  The first line!  haha  Then as I read it got stronger.  I laughed.  I smiled.  I loved it!  It is writing like this that makes my morning a ittle happier.  Thanks!

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October 30, 2005

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That a pretty good lyric, and you couldn’t have chosen a better melody than Folsom Prison.  Good choice.  The one thing I will say is that I’m not extremely fond of the murdering you part, but it works in the overall context of the piece.

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November 10, 2005

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Bravo to anything keeping Johnny Cash alive, particularly Folsom Prison.

I absolutely love what you did with it.  The love that is bad for me but I keep sticking with her is a great concept in the context of the lonely, depressed character in Folsom Prison.

I don’t know that I would change a thing.  I have no idea on copyrights but I sure enjoyed it, in fact I think it’s a great idea to write new lyrics to old music, you’re probably not allowed to benefit from it, but who knows.

In any case it’s fun and interesting to me.   And, on some level rappers and hip hop guys and gals do it all the time.

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November 11, 2005

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I really like the lyrics to this song.  The lyrics are very catchy, and it seems like a typical country/western song.  I like how the song explains that the man can’t live without the woman, because how strong their bond is with each other.  Very well written and you did a wonderful job!

Captaincookie avatar General Stranger

November 13, 2005

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well, this lyrics are very good, striaght and to the point, but at the same time it captures little subtle images that carries it into evaluation when someone will listen to this song, i like it because it plays on both sides of the ball, simplistic and complicated, and the balance of the two is a great thing to have , altough i thought you could expand and do better with this, im going to give you a…

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November 14, 2005

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November 14, 2005

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Watch out weird al!! This is actually pretty fun. i change lyrics to songs all the time. Who gives a fuck about copyrights? Only conceited assholes.  I can’t rate this higher though because it is just a re-write.

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November 15, 2005

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I couldnt help but to have a smile while reading this. I think it was kind of funny. But not in a make fun of way, but in a good way. I think it was pretty good, and you definantly got the point accros. Toyr whipped. I wouldnt want to stay with a women like that. But good job!

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December 25, 2005

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