Young Adult / Boyz And Friendz

KareBear3605: Hey there Roxxi…hows it goin?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Pretty good.  And urself, Kari Beari?
KareBear3605: Pretty good…OMG, don’t you just LOVE 8th grade?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: OMG YES!!  All our new teachers are friggin sweet!
KareBear3605: Yeah, especially Mrs. Lorenson.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Yeah, she is so pretty.  I love her hair!
KareBear3605: I wonder if it was always that blonde?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar:  Have you seen her boobs??
KareBear3605: Ew, you were looking??!?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: I just wish mine were that big…
KareBear3605: LOL Shut Up!!
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Okey dokey…
KareBear3605: Can I confess something to you??
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Sure, go ahead.
KareBear3605: It’s about ummmm…...well…..
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Spit it out girlie!!
KareBear3605: Roxxi, it’s about Christian.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Oh.
KareBear3605: Do you still wanna know?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Yes! Why wouldn’t I?
KareBear3605: Well….because…
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Cuz he’s my ex?
KareBear3605: Yeah.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: .....................
KareBear3605: Roxxi?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: I’m still here.
KareBear3605:Okay.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar:  ...........
KareBear3605: Do you still wanna know?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Of course!! Kari, you’re my best friend and you can tell me anything!
KareBear3605: Okay…well, you remember how we were at the library the other day, hangin out in the young adult section?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar:  Yeah…so??
KareBear3605: Well, you remember how you, me, Christian, Lauren, Greg, and Frank were all stting in the Teen Room?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Yes, get on with it!!
KareBear3605: OK, OK, well after you and Lauren got kicked out, Frank and Greg went to grab a bit to eat.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: And? And??
KareBear3605: Me and Christian were sitting there talking, and he just leaned over and kissed me…at first I felt really nervous and happy, then I felt really guilty, cuz I knew what happened between you two.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Oh.
KareBear3605: Are you mad?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: No, I’m not mad.  I mean, I did break up with him after all.
KareBear3605: Yeah, but only because he didn’t defend you when his friends were making fun of you that one time.  Everyone knows you still like him.
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Nah, it’s fine, I’m over him anyway!!  besides, I never really liked him in the first place.
KareBear3605: OK, thank you so much for understanding!!
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: No prob Kare, you know I luv ya like a sis!
KareBear3605: I luv you too!
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Sooooo, does this mean you and Chris are a couple now??
KareBear3605: If I say yes, are you going to tease me for the rest of my life?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: I will anyway! DUH lol
KareBear3605:lol…what if I told you me and Chris were going to the movies on Saturday?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: No way!
KareBear3605: Yes way!
Roxxi_the_Rockstar:  Awwww, Kari, your first real boyfriend!
KareBear3605:Oh, shut it!
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: You know I’m just playin
KareBear3605: Yeah…
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Okay, wel I gotta go, dinner’s ready!
KareBear3605:Yum Yum!! What are you having?
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Mashed potatoes and turkey.
KareBear3605: ohhhhhhh yummy!! I’ll be over in fifteen minutes ok?  Wait for me!!
Roxxi_the_Rockstar: Bye fruitcake!
KareBear3605: Luvv ya! See ya!!

Roxxi_the_Rockstar signed off at 6:05 p.m. 9-03-07

KareBear3605 signed off at 6:06 p.m. 9-03-07

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April 06, 2007

reyak

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reyak reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

This is a very cute conversation,  but I dont think it can be catagorised as anything,...at all… If you, however, kill off the screen names, and add some discription between most of the lines, you might have something there. It’s very sweet, but it needs narration. what was going on at the time? were both charactors sitting at a desk, or was one of them laying on a bed with their laptop watching tv? was something else going on around them? noises, smells, what ther were consuming,... anything goes in discriptions, you may have fun!

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April 22, 2007

by imjustme

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Okay thanks, but that’s what the story IS.  Could you read part two??  i think I did better describing things there.  But not all books have to have description.  I personally HATE it when books describe stupid stuff that no one in real life would even glance at.  Most teenagers are like me, and that’s the audience I’m writing for.

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April 05, 2007

Lenore

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April 05, 2007

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March 29, 2007

rsaioxkreual

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