thank you again amy. hope to review some of your stuff soon. cheerz :)
Poetry / a poem
open your mind, take the spaceship and explore the intergalactic planets which surround you
float in the breeze, put a smile on your face, dont feel ashamed
innocent smile, friendly nature
catch up, dont worry
ring me, i will
the sooner, the better
arrive late, dont arrive
greet me, meet me
sleep well, wake up
live long, without me
buy things, waste time
sell things, just survive
wash jeans, hand shake
common bond, made up
materialistic behaviour, realistic dreams?
empty life, full compromise
unhealthy attitude, burning desire
rest once, quality time
miss you, destined apathy
ritualistic masturbation, lick fire
closed eyes, at home
feeling nice, feeling bored
sick of, trying hard
not trying, losing it
wanting peace, quiet noise
drink lots, with us
my life, your life
my heart, your heart
two things, one life
happy now, feeling love
breathing sweat, smelling pure
waking up, knowing you.
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I thought this had a very sweet yesterdays after taste to it.I think its awesome.Its delicate and gentle yet very masculine as well. Anyways I thought you did a great job.Keep up the good work.
Amy
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