Quotes / Hiei Quote-SDA

This quote is very true. We all carry our own scars, and pains. Without them would we still be human.

True. pain and heartache are a part of life and you captured it in this quote. It speaks to us all.

Scars imply that one is not shallow, because shallow hearts would be torn and sundered by a single stroke. They couldn’t withstand damage, or repair the gaping wound.

Excellent thought x3. A nine for you, since I admit the title confused me.

Great thought you have here. Could be shortened some eg: “Unscared heart, shallow soul”. You can use that if you wish:)

Very deep words for someone so young!  Maybe if you said it with a metaphor or simile it would be even better.

I like the over all idea and what you say about “Scars”.  How going through difficult situations in life makes one a Deep soul contrary to a “Shallow Soul”.

However, I think you can say in a shorter way.  If you refine your quote and take out things that are not needed.  It sounds a bit too formal for my taste.

Besides that, its great and I like it

So work on it.

For your age that is a great insight to have. We learn from being hurt and the scars give us character. I am impressed. Do you have other work on here? I would like to read.