Haiku/Senryu / Bats

Against the night sky
A bats fringed wings spread to fly
Velvet on velvet

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July 11, 2008

Smintboyuk

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412	80.2% (111 votes)	25.8%

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July 10, 2008

Harold_P

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July 09, 2008

Blue_Eyes

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July 09, 2008

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July 08, 2008

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July 08, 2008

guild

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July 04, 2008

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July 02, 2008

sjvance

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366	65.7% (166 votes)	32.5%

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July 01, 2008

Zakari39

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280	85.4% (48 votes)	25.4%

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32	M	United Kingdom	October 15

Zakari39 reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

Quite a nice image, especialy the velvet feel of the bat’s wings, although starting with ‘Against’ jolts the rhythm away from a more laid back feel.

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June 30, 2008

candice

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17	20.0% (5 votes)	19.4%

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22	F	Brooklyn, NY	August 27

candice reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

Gave a pretty picture… I could see that bat spreading wings and started to take off.. nice.

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