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“Your Smile is Like an Oasis to This Weary Desert Traveler”.

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Blue_Eyes avatar General Stranger

July 05, 2008

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I’m not sure if I’ve heard something similar to this sentiment in the past, but I believe that I have. However, it is good. :)

TiffVicious avatar General Stranger

July 05, 2008

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Wow this is very romantic, it seems like it should be a line right out of a love letter or poem. Its extremely clever and very beautifully put. I love it!

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July 01, 2008

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Ain’t it so?  A smile can rescue the weak from the storm.

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July 01, 2008

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A good simile. Though it wasn’t as bright and captivating as the title. It feels as if it’s lyrics to a song.

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July 01, 2008

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Clear.  Concise.  And endearing.  If this was said to me, it would definitely make me smile.  Nice quote!

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June 07, 2007

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I’m sorry, that sounds like something a 15 year old would write to their boyfriend/girlfriend.. it’s not original, nor inspiring…

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June 06, 2007

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Thanks now get out of my face.

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June 01, 2007

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that is so sweet. its nice and romantic.and the kind of t=stuff i personally like to see. its amazing.

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May 28, 2007

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I like this quote.  The idea expressed is easily understandable and poetic.

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May 28, 2007

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This is a really heartwarming quote. I am waiting to hear that from someone.

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Loc: Everett, WA
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