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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Loss

I’m at a loss of words to articulate what I feel.

Most people expect me to be ideal,
to have the perfect things, and to respond.

Yet, I’m at a loss.

You yourself said that one day I’ll have it all,
but the truth is, I’m tired of waiting.

Yet I can’t tell you,
because I’m at a loss.

My loved ones are losing things they think is their own, but soon when I ask them ‘what went wrong’ I hope they too will be at a loss.

The pain I see in other’s faces when they realize the small things they can’t have, and they ask me to explain it; I’m at a loss of words

It makes me feel horrid

Question
I have a question: do you suppose that people will always have the worst, or do you assume that one day someone will have the answer to all the questions. If the second is what you hope in that case I hope you look at life that way, for optimism shall be your way. I wish whoever reads this, the best. May you always have Hope and Love for others, for the reason that you should not ever give up on this world. Don’t take this page seriously; it’s only words.

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July 26, 2007

filbert

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60	M	Coeur D Alene, ID	February 13

filbert reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Only words-
Words are everything
Seeds
for
spring
planting-
Seeds sprout dreams
Words-come to me the spider says (in a whisper)
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You really now how to throw a curve ball, wow! That ending went into me light lightning.

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July 04, 2007

dark_angel_826

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25	F	Indianapolis, IN	April 26

dark_angel_826 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I was right with you until the last line.

‘Don’t take this page seriously; it’s only words.’

Words can be the driving force to move mountains, especially in the life of someone who is having a hard time. Optimism is a powerful force. It is easily infectious, if you are strong enough to withstand the stinging callousness from the pessimistic.

What can I say, I am an eternal optimist.