Poetry / I Don't Wanna Be Jessies' Dolphin

Look what you hit
what you won’t babysit
that tot like you thought
anymore.
Look what you slit
thinking you could outwit
any god who’d permit blood and gore.
Look what you did
to that brave little kid
whose candle stayed lit
just a bare little bit
enough to emit
where she had been hid
and how close she was to a door

Reviews

July 09, 2007

squarehopper

personal info reviewer stats

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
1723	80.2% (718 votes)	37.6%

Age	Gender	Location	Last Login
45	M	Bolingbrook, IL	November 18

squarehopper reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

This 83 word review has not been unlocked.

June 08, 2007

Brazen

personal info reviewer stats

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
40	50.0% (12 votes)	29.9%

Age	Gender	Location	Last Login
22	F	Brooklyn, NY	April 05

Brazen reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

This 96 word review has not been unlocked.

Showing 1 - 2 of 2