Poetry / The Funnel

The solid shape of a tornado
With the mirror reflection of my esophogous
firmly planted underneath
Filled with a dark honey-colored liquid
The tube enters my mouth
anticipating
Slides with miraculous ease
to my core
And surprisingly
remains

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April 04, 2009

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