Poetry / Star Burst
Innocense touched
And brushed her every curve
Brushing past the hips
And reaching her thighs
Longing for release
And exploding into a million stars
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I love this, especially how the last line wraps it all up and you can feel it. You can also see it and how grand the sight.
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