Limericks / Just Because

this is very good. you’ve got a great grasp on the idea of limericks. it was fun to read and i hope to see more from you.

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July 23, 2008

by BFD

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Thanks, karrina.  I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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Center stanza has very long lines but make a good point. I enjoyed this limerick/rant to the fullest extent. I have the same feelings.

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July 23, 2008

by BFD

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Thanks, easywriter57.  I’m glad you enjoyed it, this was a fun piece to write.

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i like it. did you write it just because? or is it supose to mean something?

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July 18, 2008

by BFD

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lol…it sort of just spilled out of me one day, what can i say…  Thanks for the review and feedback, skuborssy.  I appreciate it.

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OK, since you asked for it: “Letting of steam” should be “letting OFF steam”, right? Three exclamation marks in a row (voice! say! way!) hurts the flow when reading it the first time. It makes you work too hard to keep the meter. The first and last paragraphs work well overall, but the second leaves a little to be desired. Still this is a good effort. Your point is well taken. And I guess it could be considered “fun” , so good job.

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July 23, 2008

by BFD

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Fun was what I was going for, so I’m glad you caught that.  Thanks, drbillpuglisi.  I appreciate the feedback.

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I LOVE this and everything you wrote.  It provides a good hearty smile because of it’s wit.  It should be your User page’s description.  It’s great everything about it.

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April 10, 2008

by BFD

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Thanks so much!  I’m glad you enjoyed it :-)

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Haha I really loved this.
The best I have read so far!
Second stanza? verse?, first line, the “of” ought to be “off” a mistake I make far too often, but to be honest I only saw it the second time I read this.
Well done this is quite impressive!

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July 23, 2008

by BFD

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Thanks, Robsyn.  I’m glad you enjoyed it.  This was a fun piece to write.

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I like this very much.  Easy to read, funny, and well put.  Just one correction, ‘off steam’.  Nice work.  Thanks for sharing.

“letting of steam. ”...off steam

And writing is one of the best ways to vent!  : )

Whether you want the critique, I’m not sure, but the rhyme scheme is perfect, but the feet per line for limericks is off.

Keep writing!  It’s definitely cathartic!