Fire me up
Throw out every laugh
Stick me up
You slaughtered the boredom
but revived the problem
Well if you dont like who I am
tough shit
(GO)
Well if you have to hate who I am
Then I’ll just have to shut the door on you
Well if you have to hate who I am
Then I’ll just have you locked out of my life
Dont knock no body’s home
nobody that you’ll like anyway
Fire away
You’ve lost your chance to hurt me
Lie away
Now you wanna play fake it and gossip?
Keeping quite to reserve truth is just fine
Now you want to pretend I’m not here?
shouldve done it sooner and saved me time
Perhaps the overlap has gone to my head
All the better
For I am better
You slaughtered the boredom
but revived the problem
Well if you don’t like who I am
tough shit
(GO)
Well if you have to hate who I am
I’ll just have to shut the door on you
Well if you have to hate who I am
I’ll just keep you locked out of my life
Don’t knock no body’s home
nobody that you’ll like anyway
Sieze the laugh
Laughter brightens the day
Sieze the day
at the cost of mine
Pass me around
I am the monkey in the middle
I didn’t pay to have my name stained
If this is the way I’m treated here
Then count me out of this clique
I’m done jumping for the treat
I spit on all of you because youre sick
You slaughtered the boredom
but revived the prolem
Well if you don’t like who I am
tough shit
(GO)
Well if you have to hate who I am
then I’ll just have to shut the door on you
Well if you have to hate who I am
then I’ll just keep you locked out of my life
Don’t knock no body’s home
nobody that you’ll like anyway
Well if you have to hate who I am
then I’ll just have to hide every tear from you
Well if you have to hate who I am
then I’ll just have to hide the damage you’ve done
I guess you don’t like what you’ve turned me into
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hi there,
i like it, the slaughter of the boredom line to jumping for a treat to get into or keep into the click. the only problem i have with it ,is that it maybe to long for a song, i suggest you trim the fat, like we all have to do it get it to be a 3 1/2 mintue song so it’s radio friendly..and you want that..but in general..nice job,jim
Dear Writer,
I like this a lot but have a problem with the title. There seems to be a disconnect between the title and the content, was that intentional?
Also, I actually think you have 2 strong repetitive themes here with one taking a commanding presence over the other.
These lines:
Well if you have to hate who I am
then I’ll just have to shut the door on you
Well if you have to hate who I am
then I’ll just keep you locked out of my life
Don’t knock no body’s home
nobody that you’ll like anyway
. . .these lines are excellent. Outstanding. I think that, overall, it’s a bit long and could use a bit more refinement and direction.
But I believe you have the makings of a great song here. I can almost hear it and what I’m hearing is very Queens of the Stone Age in my head.
Good luck to you.
Cheers!
R
I’m begginer in English, because this I can not write about grammar, but your lyric sounds good, it’s need hard-rock or heavy-metal songs to put in evidence the things you feeling. But this lyrics it’s not my favorite style, but if found the right music is possible go more. Sorry my bad English.
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