Poetry / My Crazy Words

Write
Write like crazy
Write like every word is abreath
A heart beat
A lover
A mother
A brother
Take care of your
Crazy words
They are yours
No one likes them
Unless they like
Them
And that
Means
Nothing
Too
You
Because they are your words
Not
Anything else but your Crazy
WORDS

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August 09, 2007

filbert

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58	M	Coeur D Alene, ID	September 24

filbert reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Hey, their’s room for crazy words. This has its place.

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August 09, 2007

Weaver

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36	M	Lexington, KY	November 04

Weaver reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

“Take care of your/Crazy words/They are yours”

That about says it… Your words are your own, and as somebody said (an old elf in a Bordertown story, if I recall), “what you create belongs to you.” It is part of you, your breath and heartbeat.

One small typo: Too should be to.