Thank you. I had it posted for awhile with the review toggle off. Wasn’t sure I wanted anyone to read it. Now, I’m glad I did.
Poetry / Background Music
Inside,
You decide.
Where will you go?
Heaven’s a lie.
Tell it to my face-
Solitude.
We are
Imaginary.
Turn the page.
This is home.
Nothing else matters-
Somewhere I belong.
So close-
I can do it (watch me now).
Numb-
Understanding.
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This has a certain ambiguous charm to it. It’s like seeing a series of intriguing snapshots very quickly. The trip is interesting, but afterwards it is unclear what it meant.
I recognized some of the titles, but only a few. If you’d left off the note, I probably would never have made the connection.
Do you have poems wholly your own? I hope so and look forward to running across them.
One really arresting image/phrase: We are/Imaginary./Turn the page. It’s rather like having a character from a novel speak directly to you, yes? ”Cheating” can have it’s benefits…...
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Very clever, and actually quite good.
Lacuna Coil? Heaven’s a Lie is one of my favorites. This is not much as a poem but it does look interesting.
I like this. The style and format in which you did this I like a lot. I look forward to seeing more from you. Happy writing.
very cool. you like lacuna coil? awesomeness, not many ppl listen to them, that i know of.
i like it a lot, it’s a really cool concept, and it makes sense too.
Have A Nice Day :)
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