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Limericks / Do as I say…
A limerick is only alive
With a rhyme in lines one, two and five.
Lines three and four yet
Must form a couplet
Or else the whole poem is flawed.
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free2rhyme2107 reviewed Version 1 -
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cute. it catches everything that a limmerick should have. it explains exactly what a limmerick should be in the correct structure. you’re right -- its subtle -- but there. the only thing i would change is the last line. i feel that the rhyming isnt correct. i dont know what to replace it with—but it should stay with the “five, alive, ...” thingy.
overall—good
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Praxtis reviewed Version 1 -
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I laughed when I finished reading it. Good work, informative and funny.
bunchesofdonald reviewed Version 1 -
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It reminds me of the old “joke poem” – “Roses are red, violets are blue, I’m schizophrenic and so am I.” You might replace flawed with another word to make it more obvious, like wrong or amiss.
Shelovestosail reviewed Version 1 -
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Great example!
I can find no flaws!
Poem_reader reviewed Version 1 -
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Very funny! You obviously dropped it on our heads “flawed”.
Your flaw being intended I ll go no further :)
SirDooogles reviewed Version 1 -
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To be honest before i read it i couldn’t remember what a limerick involved, but now i know. Very catchy.
Robsyn reviewed Version 1 -
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I loved this, it really made me smile.
And I understood it too haha.
Jimmel104 reviewed Version 1 -
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LOL…it’s a squeaker and it is very very subtle, but fun. Your second line is a bit awkward. I wonder if there is another way to say “With a rhyme…”
Not the best I have read but it works.
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wulfenstraat reviewed Version 1 -
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It is so subtle, I missed it. Even using regional dialects, I was unable to get line 5 to rhyme with lines 1 and 2. OK, what’s the secret? How should it be read?
Myth_of_Caer reviewed Version 1 -
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I rarely read limericks,so if this is true,I’m assuming you purposely did not rhyme line five (?). I see no sight rhyme, no sound rhyme… clever, if it was on purpose,and forgive me for this, silly if not.
Best of luck, and keep writing
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