Lyrics / state of full distrust

iii believe in guns
i believe in fun
i believe in smoking grass
when your homework ain’t done
i believe in good sex
and a nice good hum
i belief in life
and chewing bubblegum

i’m sick
of it all, man
(i wanna bring it down again)
ah, yea

iii believe in love
and i believe in hate
i believe in masturbating
when you just can’t wait
i believe in rides
and the garden state
now make me fucking noise
before i punch your face

i’m sick
of it all, man
(i wanna bring it down again)
ah, yea

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April 19, 2008

beccapikle

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beccapikle reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Overall, I think you’ve done a good job with this. It’s lighthearted and funny and very entertaining and I could imagine it having a jaunty sort of rhythm to it that would be fun to listen to. However there were a few lines are kind of awkward. For example, line three, “nice good hum.” Saying its both nice and good is kind of redundant. Plus, you already used the word good to describe the sex and it’s a little uncreative. The line about bubblegum is a good one, so obviously you have to have something that rhymes with gum, but maybe you could think of something else to say there? Just my opinion. Anyway, good write, keep it up.